Serious Potential!
As someone that's played a few MMOs, I think this has some great stuff up ahead if you just keep working at it! No matter how much work you're doing, it's worth it, this piece was really good (for its length).
Speaking of MMOs... I should probably hop back on GW to see what my guild is up to, haha.
And again, excellent job on this, I'd like to see more :)